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Hi Amelia. Im Dylan from Yaldhurst Model School. I like how you have put in were, when, how, what beginning middle end. This reminds me of when I went to Hanmer Springs and was in the hot pools! Next time you could add a photo of you in the pool! Is your pool a hot pool? From DYlan at Yaldhurst Model School.
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Hi Amelia. Im Dylan from Yaldhurst Model School. I like how you have put in were, when, how, what beginning middle end. This reminds me of when I went to Hanmer Springs and was in the hot pools! Next time you could add a photo of you in the pool! Is your pool a hot pool? From DYlan at Yaldhurst Model School.
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